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wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-07-04 07:29 PM

I am a shadow
Thumped from the inner void
Shaken free
As crystallizations of thought

A reveled shadow
The quintessential
Labeler
Of everything that I am not

Please quell my urges
To stand in front of you
And break free
I was cast a lot, this life

Shadowed and binding
I am the underworld
You're finite
I feed 'pon your empty strife

When you’re feeling down
Just cast your eyes on me
I want you
To feel the pain of love

Shadows memories
They are the same to me
Please tell me
What you are dreaming of

I am the shadow?
You dripped a thought on me
I could die
That you still remain

How is it so fair
Passion is a failing
You should fall
As I, in the rain

Shadows dance at noon
Souls are mostly feeding
Could you tell
I want to taste

I’m not a shadow
I am only you
Fallen down
Ignored as waste

Shadow Shadow

I am tired

The anti-you

I aspired!

Shadow Shadow

I can’t die
until you do

Shadow Shadow

On that day
I will be you!

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 07-04-2001).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-07-04 09:41 PM

Wayoutwalt,
This is really wayout, it's a good thing you left a shadow to pull it back. Enjoyed

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

2 posted 2001-07-04 09:53 PM

I like this one it was different

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-07-04 10:01 PM

Walt~

I am the shadow?
You dripped a thought on me'

'I’m not a shadow
I am only you
Fallen down'

I greatly enjoyed where your thoughts took me in this~
Pretty pondamerous ! Uh-Huh !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

4 posted 2001-07-05 12:16 PM

Shadows dance at noon
Souls are mostly feeding
Could you tell
I want to taste

this was shivery good....I like it alot

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2001-07-06 12:10 PM

Walt-
   this is way cool!
   i like it much!!

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2001-07-06 04:14 AM

Wow! Tastefully done Walt!!

                "When you’re feeling down
                 Just cast your eyes on me
                 I want you
                 To feel the pain of love"

Classy stuff!!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2001-07-06 06:13 AM

I am the shadow?
You dripped a thought on me

Oh Walty, wonderful poem, excellent lines!
Well Done

Maree

"little miss understood
little misunderstood"

~Marry me Jane~

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