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Admission Of Love
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Admission Of Love |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Searching for an answer never seeming to find, was this really love or have I just been blind? I let you into this heart ice melted slowly away, together I thought we'd be you said forever you would stay. I'm not sure who you are now but I loved who you were then, each memory held close to my heart my mind relives them over again. Although I sit here, broken hearted my dreams are of only you... even now you have my heart and I'm still in love with you. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Gentle smile, Gentle Spirit, it seems the words, but I loved what you were then, spells it out, that was then, this is now. Time to move to someone who will stir you like it was then...nicely written |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'm not sure who you are now but I loved who you were then, each memory held close to my heart my mind relives them over again. ========================= *sigh* ... this one hits home GS bittersweet tender render...with well done cadence... once we heal with time...then the memories become something to sweetly remind not haunt. sincere write poetess gentle, jm We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit, Indeed and I enjoyed the read. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Yeah been there Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...your thoughts and feelings convey what is storming my heart!!!... "...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Expressed very well...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know that feeling all too well, GS...sometimes the missing of it needs to be embraced ((hugss)) and hope all is well ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Again, my thanks to all for your kindness and wisdom. Hugs On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
oh yeah. . . I'm with everyone else on this one. . . good job GS. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful honest and pure your love, great poem. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
MY dear dear aunt, i beleive u have got a passion 4 poetry! lol neway! i loved this poem despite the sad feelings i know u have behind it. keep ur chin up and dont look back is all i can say. ~ ur neice,  fall hard, practice harder not to fall |
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