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To the Moon
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To the Moon |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Shine down you lunar glow, pull on my heart like the tides that flow. Make me have memories of old, of ages past and tales to be told. Soak into my very soul, fill me with your heavenly goal. What was, is and is, was in your sight, so take me up in utter delight. Give me the past and let me keep, all those thoughts that were so sweet. Your shining is magic in its certainty, for it has returned to me all of eternity |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ You had to tease me with this beauty, eh ? Well, it worked .... BEAUTIFUL ~ Thank you for sharing the glow of night with me.  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Marge, your wonder had to have a reply, ah?..gentle smile |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
ooooooo you did pull on my heart like the tides that flow ....how lovely!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Moon's glow beams well in your spell....and a wonderful response to Marge's piece.... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Very very nice words of the night and its casting beams of enchantment. Nice work, keep on writing. Rick |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Shine down you lunar glow, pull on my heart like the tides that flow. Make me have memories of old, of ages past and tales to be told. Soak into my very soul, fill me with your heavenly goal. ==================================== The moon isnt the only thing shining here... so is the poet... this is cadence kissed and lovely Logan this gem goes into me treasure chest peace and poetry to you poet sir  jm We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh, Logan, this is stunning my friend. Excellent work here. I love poems about the heavens.  All writing comes |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I believe the moon has powers, at least for me. This is perfect. Magic. Sandra |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Magic indeed! Beautifully written. Deb |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah...I was almost finished and thought that I had to send this to Marge, don't things happen in strange ways? This was a lovely luner piece, (must have been a full moon there too!) If I made you smile today then I did my job! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely, dear Logan. Cor |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
such a beautiful sight this moon of yours |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan--The moon speaks in this shining of a poem! |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 I'm running out of compliments. Just letting you know I'm reading. You know the rest, eh? |
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