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Storm Shivers |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Lightning gilds her body as she stands in the pouring rain. Thunder echoes her wild heart, yearning for something she cant quite touch. He is there...in every drop of rain, falling on her body, touching her every need. Rainkissed lips call his name. And he is there pulling her to him in the driving rain. His lips follow the rain. Does he hear the thunder...or is it her heart? They slip to the ground no longer aware of the raging storm. Its a faint echo of their own. Rain on their bodies. Falling, falling, a deluge of passions storm, full blown and out of control, a tempest in her eyes. They ride the wind of longing, til the thunder is just a memory. and lightning no longer plays in the sky. The storm dies a lovers death. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Wonderful, Paula, such imagery with all the fury of the storm,, well done...gentle smile |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh,Paula~ This is just lovely ! Excellent portrayal of emotions. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Paula- I love this!  Very beautifully done.. hugs. ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a tempest in her eyes... lovely words, Paula ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Does he hear the thunder...or is it her heart?" You've captured this scene beautifully Paula ... wonderful imagery, very nicely written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow, what beautiful imagery and passion. Well done indeed! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Good thing it's raining or you'd be on fire lady! THIS IS GORGEOUS!!! oh--and we'll swap nature stories later!  |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Loved it. Beautifully written. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You've got this great way of writing romantic hot!..... "Falling, falling, a deluge of passions storm, full blown and out of control, a tempest in her eyes. They ride the wind of longing, til the thunder is just a memory. and lightning no longer plays in the sky. The storm dies a lovers death." Very nice indeed! Hummm! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Logan...Im glad you liked this thanks Marge...it was sweetly inspired thank you Vicky...thank you sweetie Wynter...thank you so much Kit...thank you...it comes from playing in the rain... Interloper...you are too kind thank you serenity...HAHHAAH ok I'm all ears now.... Poeminister...glad you loved it thanks ethome...heheh but romance can be hot babes...thanks |
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