Open Poetry #14 |
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Celebration in Surrender |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Celebration in Surrender I surrender, I surrender to a force oh so tender to you I give all spellbound in your call the candle awaits with fire waxen melt in desire yearning for your request totally yours no protest a celebration to evoke awakened with every stroke every trace of your sensation is the gift of your temptation "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
mmmmmmmmm this makes me wish for just such a temptation, you worded this perfectly ![]() |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
This is good....very good.... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Slick--Enjoyed the read. Well said. PM |
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love's victim New Member
since 2001-05-24
Posts 2the old city icehouse |
you sizzle! |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
Temptation can be a celebration. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
lovely thoughts, Helen. Kathleen Blake |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
serender begs serender to sensations' celebrations spellbound we're found burning with yearning S Arthur . . . Hills jump with brooks. trees tumble out of twigs and sticks; e e cummings [This message has been edited by S Arthur Grey (edited 05-25-2001).] |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
What a tempting offer - LP let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
The candle awaits...excellent! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Wonderful poem, I really love the title.... Celebration in Surrender enjoyed the read "difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is so wonderful! I sure wish I had your talent! Great work! ![]() Sauni Sauni :) |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Surrender? or subtle retreat, which wins wars also. Very lovely read..thank you...gentle smile |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Oh goodness, whew... ![]() Michael Proust- |
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kansas-jim Junior Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 22Willits,Ca |
My goodness, I can't wait to work with you. You touched me. Thank you |
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