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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-07-03 11:06 PM


My eyes survey the valley
Through the misty mountain rain
Soon our sweet loving
Will begin over again

I stand here stoking the fire
Once again the embers burn
Such love we had made
And so much more of you I yearn

I hear your voice behind me
On the four poster bed
This is the place for our loving
And it's where I'm now lead

Your voice so easily soothes me
As I make my way over to you
Once imprisoned within your arms
There's nothing I wouldn't do

The flames so intense from the fire
Like my desire that burns deeply for you
Here we lie complete in our nakedness
As we enjoy the spectacular view

Your hand sensually travel over my body
As I succumb to your sweet caress
I'd like you to adopt my heart
As the place for your new address

You could live right here inside me
From the world you and I could hide
In this mountain hideaway
Is where we could reside

So much pleasure your smile brings me
As you send your love my way
Right here by my side
Is where I'd like you to stay

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
1 posted 2001-07-04 01:24 AM


I agree, it is so wonderfully romantic to get away to a "Mountain Hideaway" and just get into one another without distraction.  This is such a beautiful poem of intimate love.
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