Independence...........from you........

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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2001-07-03 08:52 PM

As your memory haunts me
I reach for the reality
of you said good-bye
finding in my soul
the very strength
I swore left me
when you exited my life
holding tight
to here.....to now
living each day
without you
and realizing
it's easier
than I thought
and with that knowledge
I whisper your name to the wind
and say good-bye to you
on my terms
and gain
my independence
....from you.....

~SEA~

7-03-01
5:48 pm

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-07-03 08:54 PM

7:51 p.m. - thank you....

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-07-03 08:55 PM

SEA, Be strong gal

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2001-07-03 08:58 PM

I feel you are strong, Susan. Yes, goodbye on your terms. Hugs

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

4 posted 2001-07-04 02:00 AM

10:57 AM ..........LOL

I love to nice poetry.

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

5 posted 2001-07-04 02:05 AM

Sea, your poem touches the very core of my heart...

My goodness you've penned an excellent write and I thank you for another great read you've provided me with...

Hugs2Usweetie
*~coco~*

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-07-04 03:16 AM

12:13 a.m. and I have said this three times! Count them - three time! Never again. Well done Sea.

If I made you smile today then I did my job!
~* Mysteria *~

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

7 posted 2001-07-04 04:01 AM

2:39am...hugs...its hard I know to make it to the point where its on your own terms...but you did it...you did it...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-07-04 05:31 AM

Like this Sea...James

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2001-07-04 09:44 AM

Happy Independence Day Sea

*you will have to teach mothy me this ..
heartfelt write me girlie-girl.
only we can set us free
hugs jm

We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide open if we just find the right words to say.
~E. McCain

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-07-04 09:46 AM

Your strength shines through every word. Happy Independence Day to you SEA. You deserve it, my friend.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

11 posted 2001-07-04 10:30 AM

Hang on to the hope that time brings strength.

Hugs,
Deb

Blaec
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 130
The Sunshine State

12 posted 2001-07-04 12:46 PM

Congratulations!
It's hard to say goodbye to the one that you
loved. It took me 4 years to find the strength that you've written about.
Great writing!

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