Open Poetry #14 |
Life is apoem |
helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
Life is a poem Rhythm Rhyme Beat in time Haiku?Thanku Pedantic with spellin' Missed the point Missed the words Missed the punch Line Never even saw the print Funning through feelings Running through friends Until words are no longer needed .. Soul to soul the words are soundless Boundless We've lived life full No less Blank verse |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ah... blank verse.. nice ending indeed... Enjoyed this..and will return to it to glean a bit more... and figure out why I feel a little anger in it... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Tanka you very much Blank verse indeed. Could that be reading between the lines? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
blank indeed. . . I see the anger. . . it's subtle. . . but it's there. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Helen...you've said so much in what was left behind! Brava! |
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Qumar Fatthi Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 59Pakistan |
The poem name is "Life is a Poem" but there is no relative maaterial to prove it............. may be i am wrong....... |
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