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helen smith
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0 posted 2001-07-03 05:40 PM



Life is a poem

Rhythm
Rhyme
Beat in time
Haiku?Thanku
Pedantic with spellin'
Missed the point
Missed the words
Missed the punch
Line

Never even saw the print

Funning through feelings
Running through friends
Until
words are no longer needed ..
Soul to soul the words are  soundless
Boundless
We've lived life full
No less
Blank
verse



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1 posted 2001-07-03 05:43 PM


Ah... blank verse.. nice ending indeed...
Enjoyed this..and will return to it to glean a bit more... and figure out why I feel a little anger in it...


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2 posted 2001-07-03 06:11 PM


Tanka you very much
Blank verse indeed.  Could that be reading between the lines?

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3 posted 2001-07-03 06:21 PM


blank indeed. . .

I see the anger. . . it's subtle. . . but it's there. . .

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4 posted 2001-07-03 06:41 PM


Helen...you've said so much in what was left behind!  Brava!
Qumar Fatthi
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5 posted 2001-07-12 04:52 AM


The poem name is "Life is a Poem"
but there is no relative maaterial to prove it.............
may be i am wrong.......


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