tells me ........................... dedicated to all muses

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Open Poetry #14

tells me ........................... dedicated to all muses

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-07-03 10:48 AM

~*~

in telling

to reach

fingers grasp
thinnest air

mind collides
against
brick walls

so sweeping
with hands
outward
motions

pulling in

gathering
thin air
to
compress

creating stair
steps

putting them up
beside
this redbricked
wall

climbing over

and out of

the box

~*~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-03 10:53 AM

Nicely done... made me think... which I always enjoy...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-07-03 10:56 AM

I do not believe you have ever thought "within the box." You are much too creative for that

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

3 posted 2001-07-03 11:22 AM

I loved the thought-provoking climbing out of that box you described so well.....

Thank you
*************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

4 posted 2001-07-03 11:29 AM

building thoughts from thinest air

sometimes we do just that
to be sure

Rex

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

5 posted 2001-07-03 02:34 PM

Lady in White, I don't know about everyone else's muses but I thought my muse was in a box until I realised it was me trying to put my muse into boxes it does not fit in.
A beautifully written poem

"Like Sand underneath the snow, I make you mine." Kristin Hersh

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

6 posted 2001-07-03 02:36 PM

Your muse is always free, dear Lady.

And she certainly knows how to keep you writing, thank goodness.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

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