Open Poetry #14 |
Ballade - not quite - but long? yes |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
The old dog had passed away she was thirteen years of age She was such a crazy dog leaving hearts with empty page We did mourn but always knew that we could not live without It should be another breed for we would compare no doubt After looking here and there then this huntingdog popped up Way up North we had some luck cause they had this darling pup Out of nine we had to choose hard to do they all were sweet But at last we did pick one to our hearts she reached indeed By car we took her with us for a long five hour drive Took a nap and played a bit her teeth as sharp as a knife Tsjip her name (the Conqueror) I saw in an old Dutch book Fast we came to understand serious her name she took And a conqueror she was pry to extend her borders Looking innocent and so but disobeying orders In the garden I did work put some plants in here and there To found out after a while they were scattered everywhere What I put in she pulls out no effect did have my call She was such a joyfull pup life for her was just a ball We put her behind a fence to protect her from the street Took her about five minutes showing she was hard to beat She had no heart for fences but would like to roam about As she spoke to me I'll tell that her voice was clear and loud I raised to her my finger pointing out that she should stay But Tsjip smiled at me and thought well I might maybe some day It will take some time to read if I told you all she did Never knew dogs with humor this one has I must admit She can open the backdoor from within and from outside Not a problem during day but she does it too at night Many hours roaming fields chasing wildlife so to speak Many miles to both our cars as we drove out there to seek And then this seven seatbelts we did loose on her account Locking in was not for her is what pighead lady found She just chewed them up she did on the moments unaware Then we locked her in a cage wich she thought was real unfair She got used to it and now she just loves her cage to sleep The new seatbelts we've put in stay there finally to keep When she was eleven months we got an arousing call Her sister placed somewhere else was not doing well at all She had not been accepted by the old dog that lived there The lady who had bought her well she really did not care In asylum she was put and I could not bear the thought For their caracter was sweet so a second dog we bought When I fetched her there I saw a small heap of misery Bold on legs and bones stuck out saddest dog I ever see Put she was almost her life in the garage and was bound She was crated in the night so she would not mess around That's where the bold legs came from cause she scratched them to get out I just cried when I heard this and forgive me cursed outlout So we did take care of her but it took her lots of days To get used to loving care softly with her tail she sways She is such a lovely dog she deserves a better life Not in darkness of a crate not that daily need to strife She got sick at three years age almost died before my eyes In the hospital she went in a cage ten times her size Addison her sickness called has to take a lot of pills Need to take them all her life otherwise the sickness kills I don't mind of what it costs it is our duty to care It's only a dog I know but she has so much to share And seeing them together playing and having a ball It feels good that we replied to that so arousing call Tsjip and Sarah A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100 [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 07-02-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ A delightful tale such as this - could not be long enough ! ! Preciously told ... you did a great job with it ! I love it - love it - love it ! This 'critter-lover' just adores Tsjip and Sarah too ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
this is definitely a love ballad...of the best kind. I applaud you, Titia |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Geez Titia...the tissue alert is in full call tonight....if you knew my love for animals...you would have warned me! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was so sweet and touching, Titia. They are both adorable!! Thank you for sharing this gem. All writing comes |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Always was a softy about cute dogs...and good writing too...neat tale my friend. Enjoyed it mucho! jwesley |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Shame on me to forget to thank you all for your sweet words. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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