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Open Poetry #14

Tides...Senryu

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-07-02 07:59 PM

Pressing, caressing
we roll on the shore in tides
Laving each craving

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 07-03-2001).]

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2001-07-02 08:07 PM

Tides resurgent pound
Waves of aphorisms lap
Surfeit at neaptide

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-07-02 08:35 PM

Crescendoing waves
roar to higher crests of blue-
lapping me and you

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-07-03 07:03 PM

I like the roll of these. . .

well done. . .

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Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

4 posted 2001-07-03 09:18 PM

WOW

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-07-03 09:29 PM

waves kissing the shore
tides sent by the moon for us
reveling within

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2001-07-03 09:38 PM

Waves kissing feet
Undertows pulling us
Wetness ensues

Hey, Nan, what language were you writing in?
I just love those foreign words!
Tides - Very lovely senryu

Liz

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-07-03 09:39 PM

pulling me to you
to the very depths of you
with each crashing wave

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