Open Poetry #14 |
A Taste of Passion |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I had a taste of love for a moment a heart beating against mine i had a taste of passion in the spring, a year ago someone i use to know left me with lovely memories kisses from my head to toe I had a taste of passion i loved him for three years for him i was a passing fancy each kiss..another game a sport he played often but just not he i will blame i was caught in a deceitful web and she was a black widow luring in the shadows i had a taste of passion he was not just one of few i had a taste of passion i swam in his eyes of blue we walked in the misty rain holding hands like lovers our long awaited rendezvous lasted not long enough his bear hugs i remember left me breathless in his arms soft kisses in elevators dinners within candlelight charms holding hands across the table making love in the jasmine night i had a taste of passion i know he was wrong for me a wine woman and song man i loved faithfully. Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. Pablo Picasso [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 05-25-2001).] |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, cool poem, I have a poem much like this one, that reminds me to put it up . I realy enjoyed reading that poem, it had a lot of meaning and a brilliant flow . Thankyou very much . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
A really good poem, I liked it. "we walked in the misty rain holding hands like lovers our long awaited rendezvous lasted not long enough" This was great, it never is enough, isn't it? |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh boy, what lines, what passion, what desire....oh boy Kathleen Blake |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Victoria, I am remained of the saying "it is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all."wonderfully written poem, really enjoyed the read. "across the unfair divide |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is a bittersweet and sadly beautiful write, Welcome back Victoria, nice to see your name and lovely poetry here again We wish ourselves beautiful, |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you angelswing...nice of you to stop by poeticknight..no not when you are in love..glad you enjoyed..thank you for peeking in irish rose..yes and if i knew you were in indianapolis at the time i could of called you haa..maybe haa..hugs thank you brian..yes but sometimes i wonder about that.. i wasnt sure if the good outweighed the bad..thanks for reading Hi janet Marie..so nice to hear from you..and am looking forward to reading your words again...hugss.. ~Victoria~
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
“A Taste of Passion” Well I’m in…for a taste! Hi Victoria nice to taste you again! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
so nice to hear from you insect.. missed you..nice to be back ~Victoria~
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the memories are wonderful here. . . very blissful. . . excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you sven..yes bittersweet memories..glad you enjoyed ~Victoria~
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LAA Junior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 11 |
Your words certainly fulfill the title, I hope to read more of you. LAA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
heartfelt touch of passions. excellent. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you LAA ..glad you enjoyed and welcome to passions.. Charisma..nice to hear from you. Ive been offline for awhile..nice to be back HUGSS.. ~Victoria~
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Vic, me too! Not fair, is it? Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
its there loss haa...HUGSS..thanks for visiting hon ~Victoria~
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
This is Universal Fantasy, and you, in fact ARE passion; and you are being sought. Jaime |
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