Open Poetry #14 |
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My Dad's Shed |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
The smell of sawdust shavings greet me As I walk in through the door How sad am I in knowing I won't see your face here anymore Such a craftsman you were In your carpentry trade So many beautiful things From your skilled hands were made This shed it was your refuge A place where you spent many days Now it seems so empty and quiet It's like the sun has lost its rays The tools you once worked with Now lay forlorn amongst the dust So many of your favourite tools With time now have begun to rust Your woodturning machine now lays dormant Out of use now for over two years The stool where you once sat remains empty And the glass of the window is not clear Smells of oil and timber now linger In this place that we called your second home And I take great comfort in knowing That in this place your spirit still roams Suetang |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh, this one really got me. I've had the same feeling whenever I came into my fathers room. He was an artist and I spent so many hours just sitting there watching him draw and paint and sculpture. You 'painted' the picture so well, thank you. Titia |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Sue, I very much enjoyed this work. Being a plumber, I can so relate to working with my hands, and with tools. I am glad it gives you comfort to have this place to go. Roger |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sue, As you know, I am also a woodworker, so I can relate to this very well. A craftman's tools are always kept in good repair and at the ready. From speaking with you, I know your father was an exceptional man. A very good write here, my friend. Michael Proust- |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
It is sad to think that the tangible things that our loved ones surrounded themselves with, can live on after they are gone. But they can be a comfort also. Joyce |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Beautiful, Sue! Your love is so apparent--very moving...my heart is with you lovie! HUGS |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sue, this was exceptional, but I think his spirit is in more places than in that room, as you have spoken of him often, I feel I almost know him, and his spirit of course carries on in you! ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This so much could have been the feelings of my half-aunt after her father, my step-grandpa died. Powerfully woven, Suetang! |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Sue, I am moved by your words. We so often write about our Mother's and the Father's of the world seem lost. My Dad was what people called a "cobble jockey" he could make something out of nothing. His work shop was stripped the day after he died by my brothers. To this day, I mourn for his tac hammer. Isn't that dumb! I just wanted you to know that I envy you his work shop. Very beautiful words you shared with us, ME |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I want to thank each and every one of you for what you wrote....your words moved me. My Dad's shed was his pride and joy and it where he weaved his craft so beautifully. To this day I have trouble going in there without being reduced to tears but I have so many fond memories of him sitting in there doing what he loved. Thank you so much..Sue Suetang |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Woodworking is my hobby and I truly enjoyed your piece. I think I know how he felt in his shop and I am glad you feel it is hallowed ground. I could smell the scent of wood in your work ![]() Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent tender writing...James |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Interloper I am so pleased you could relate to this and my Dad's shed remains pretty much as it was before he died two years ago. I feel his presence there more than anywhere else when I visit the family home......Sue James Michael Thank you for your kind words......Sue Suetang |
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