Open Poetry #14 |
Distance of Love |
Lonely Shadow Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128Virginia |
Can love reach to the ends of the earth? Can the love survive this vast distance? Is it possible for two lovers to be together even though they are a world apart? I believe that it is possible Because the woman whom I adore the beautiful angel who plucked the sorrow from my beating heart and gave it new life She is beyond my sight and reach But, I can feel her loving presence I can sense her gentle smile when she is happy Oh my love, when can we be together When can I touch your sweet lips with mine? To share the bounties of our love? Soon, I know it will be soon Then the happiness I've longed for Willl finally fill my loving heart and surround me, for as long as I draw breath I will always love you Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Another fantastic poem Lonely Shadow . It is also a very sad one, but in other ways it is realy happy . I am glad that you have a love that great . I enjoyed reading it . Thanks, L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This has "hope" strewn all throughout....chances are, it will happen.... belief has a large part in what happens to one's life.... I enjoyed! |
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Ann Member
since 2000-07-07
Posts 64Australia |
great poem Shadow....it shows a capacity to love that many people would probably not think possible. all the best |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
love transcends all. . . you're learning this. . . that's the first lesson. . . great poem. . . I love the way that you showed the longing here. . . not too much. . . just enough. . . -------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
oh so wonderful,you are so talented |
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