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Dearly Departed
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Dearly Departed |
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Lonely Shadow Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128Virginia 
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Tears roll down my cheek as I weep for my fallen friend who was taken away too soon staring up into the heavens, I scream "Why did she have to die?!?" suddenly, I grow silent, my senses peaked listening, as if to hear a reply but, only silence fills this dismal place glancing down at her grave slowly a strange feeling overwhelms me as if some force is with me draining the pain and sorrow from my being I slowly start to smile as I remember her face the way she made me feel inside the many times we spent together I soft whisper, "I'll miss you" as I turn to walk away I lay a rose upon her grave my way of saying goodbye and to show that I will always love her Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
That's a very sad, touching piece . A beutiful poem, that made me swallow hard . Such a shame . A friend remembered is a friend forever though . Thanks . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Good writing...James |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A very melancholy write, indeed.... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hi, I was at the main site today and came across a poem of yours. So I wanted you to know. This is so sad...but hopeful too. A nice poem for this Memorial weekend.  |
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