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And The River Flows---with Poemcrazy
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And The River Flows---with Poemcrazy |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
A minute past midnight, the full moon aglow, they meet where the stream pools to fall into its flow. The water laps, advances, withdraws, pushing slowly, rhythm of pause. The river sighs, their embrace in the stream, so much like a dream. Gentle, gentle, cool water, soft as finest silk, ripples over heated skin. Droplets beg to be licked away by a lovers tongue achingly slow. Oh. Oh she whispers...murmurs...moans....pleads his hands follow the waters drift, easing over satin skin, flowing, creating a current of desire. A river's song of ever long and longing. Oh, she sighs, then opens eyes to see his face, framed by stars. She breathes his name against his lips his need is at his fingertips, drowning in this love they make, timeless like the current, an ever flowing heat, an unquenchable burn, And the river flows. He touches her face, places his fingers against her lips. Shhhhhhhhhh he whipers. Listen to the rivers song. He pulls her closer still. the rivers hold a lesser grip. Legs wrapped tight around him, moans compete with night birds calls. Enmeshed, in motion, dancing to the river's song. The moonlight scatters from moistened skins, and sparkles in their wake. The river has a thousand fingers and slides them over everywhere. Its current ignites their skin, their fires within - aglow, in this place that only they know. [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 07-02-2001).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
What a wonderful combination you two made here!!! this is fantastic, and needs to be at the top of the list.....where it rightfully should be. Soft, sensual, and beautifully written......my compliments to you both!! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Well said Sunnyone..back to the top it goes! Well done!  Roniece |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula & PoemCrazy~ Just captivating ! 'The river has a thousand fingers and slides them over everywhere.' *sigh* *sigh* *sigh* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
great duo here, I loved reading about those fingers...  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful...the ocean is good also...James |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful sensual writing...you two work well together. Nicely done. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunnyone...thanks me twin...he is such a joy to write with... Roniece Dawson-Bruce...thank you so much... Marge...mmmm yes you picked my favorite line...his line actually...its an experience waiting to happen...soon...thanks Irish Rose...lol reading? Babe I cant wait to experience them....hehehe...thank you James...yes and with the ocean you have the waves....fun stuff...thanks sweetie Poeminister...he is quite a partner...makes me think in different time...thank you |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow....hot and passionate in places while being soothed by the beautiful romance of the setting....wonderful writing you two! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ethome....glad you could feel the romance... |
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