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Heart & Soul
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Heart & Soul |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Heart... dear sweet heart together we have been through so much always trying again to feel the flame of love's touch the pretty flame always draws us in this time hoping to not feel burn, only heat keep holding on for another day don't put your head down in shame and defeat you must be so damn tired of me asking you to hold on for yet another day when all i do is make the same mistakes even after you try to show me the way Soul... You cry out to the heavens above No not this again, this thing called love But this time it's different, I promise you This time won't end in tears of blue So many times in the past You've been shredded, love never to last Screaming to me to stop the pain Trying to hide from the pounding rain I know you want to crumble in to two But don't give up yet...this I beg of you Put your faith in me once more This time to the heavens my love will soar Heart and Soul... Finally you both are together Do not abandon me now, I need you with me This time it won't be the same But if I do end up in bittersweet pain again I did it all for love's flame "but i see your true colors, |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, dear Amy/Aim...in loves flame,yes, to be in that flame is to stay warm with the heat of the soul..this time, yes, this time..isn't that all we can do? most gentle smile, nicely done with gentleness and hope |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes..may it not fail to be united... enjoyed the poem... good work! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Ah, yes, Amy, "for love's flame" - we are all helpless to this powerful desire. This is well written, the flow, rhyme and sentiment is excellent!~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful expression Amy, filled with inspiration, anticipation and hope. Very nicely written!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quote: then, you understand. . .  wonderful my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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