Open Poetry #14 |
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The Courtship |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada ![]() |
![]() ~*~ The Courtship ~*~~* Daybreak *~ No proclamation is given ~ No band playing a tune ~ No chorus to announce the arrival. ~* As day comes *~ Night flirts with daylight ~ Lifting her ebony gown ~ She bares her light blue legs. ~* The courtship begins *~ She tethers her long braid ~ Undoing her woven purple hair ~ As her vermilion nightgown falls. ~* Seductively *~ She collects her trinkets ~ Moons, stardust, and stars ~ She deposits into her compact. ~* And coyly *~ Daylight overcomes her now ~ Reaching into the fading darkness ~ He kisses her face. ~* Linked together in love *~ Daylight encircles her evening cloud ~ Drawing daylight over her head ~ She is gone! ~* Their courtship complete *~ Another dawning is here, A union of sanctity, And new day is born. ~* Rejoice *~ ~* o0o *~ Mysteria © 1999 photo: http://www.freefoto.com "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sharon! SHARON! Sharon! This is soooo clever and beautifully laced with imagery. This is a keeper! Can you tell that I love it?! ![]() Take care, hun ~Happy Canada Day~ Melissa |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ So lovely your trinkets (one of my favorite words) ... Sunlight breathes a sigh in breaking~ across the cerulean blue of sky Rested from her indigo slumber she dances gaily by In yawn of dawn she replaces trinkets of the night And all the world is set aglow with glory from her light Seeeeeeeeee .... my muses just love it ! Little rascals got out their crayons ! Love ya', sweet poetess. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
enjoyed to the fullest this one! |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is really beautiful. A wonderful description of day break. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Melissa: I am so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you again for the Canada Day poem, it was really heartwarming. I am taking it with me to read to everyone tonight by the way, so thank you! ![]() Marge: Yup, that is what I meant to say, and you said it better, and much more colorful too. That took a LOT of time to do that comment, so I want to thank you from the bottom of my little pea-picking heart! Irish Rose: Oh, I so glad you like this one, thank you. Trillium: A compliment from you is truly taken to this new little poetic person's heart, thank you so very much. "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Wow........what a courtship you discribed...a really awsome imaginitive representation of day and night.....of light and darkness........ I loved it...... Thank you dear Mysteria for letting us watch it...... ![]() ************************* It's only me.......only me |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Wowzers! Sharon...is there no scenario that you cannot place upon your canvas, and paint beautiful colors across the face of it...turning it into something so unique and lovely it simply takes our breath away? Awesome, my friend...absolutely AWESOME! Hugs and smiles to you, and much love, dawn |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
My Enchanted Melody...LOL, well I had to turn this insomnia into something! I actually saw sunset and sunrise and it was a marriage made in heaven today so I fished out an old poem about the same scenario once before, glad you liked it. Dawn...Nope! Now, I may not be as good as some but my imagination well there is no stopping that little critter! Thank you Texas Tea Rose! If I have made you smile today, then I have done my job! ~* Mysteria *~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Temptress: OMG, I am so happy you did LOL ![]() |
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