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Open Poetry #14

I Need You

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2001-07-01 03:27 PM

I Need You
By: Noah Eaton
5/27/01

Without you
My heart cries in sadness
The days just seem to slip away too fast
Without a worthy memory to hold on to

The minutes just add up in time
With not one golden moment to keep
My whole will falls apart
Tears of sadness flood my mind

You’re all I can think about now
And everything I need
And my dreams slip into thin air
Emptiness stings me, and it’s so hard to come around

Without you
My heart breaks deep inside of me
I get weak, and I waste countless hours
Crying on my bed, not knowing what I can do

Without you
The sun never seems to shine
You are everything in me, as I am everything in you
I need you…

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-07-01 03:32 PM

Enjoyed this Noah...James

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-07-01 03:33 PM

Be strong for we don't always get what WE think we need. I do like how you phrase your feelings.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-07-01 05:48 PM

I truly relate to these feelings of loss. My heart goes out to the person feeling them.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-07-01 05:56 PM

This one speaks to me in ways you can only imagine. Great experssion, Noah.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-07-01 09:19 PM

Full of love, that's all I can pick up. Thanks for this one

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