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Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

0 posted 2001-07-01 01:12 AM

I saw you in my dreams last night
I can't believe you're still there
I know it was so long ago
but the pain's still there to bare

you were walking down a hallway
when you came up to me
you didn't have to say a word
your thoughts were clear to see

you had the look of anger
yet filled with laughter inside
you were like a lion
that had been caged too long with pride

I woke with tears in my eyes
wondering if you were right
if you didn't break me
why are you still with me at night?

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-07-01 02:15 AM

Hugs...I'm fighting a dream demon myself.
Thanks for this one, loved the picture unfolding as a dream does, fragmented and surreal...just like love, gone awry.

I know it doesn't sound like it? But I enjoyed this much.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-07-01 02:36 AM

you were like a lion
that had been caged too long with pride

great line!

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

3 posted 2001-07-01 03:30 AM

Funny, posted close to the same thing tonight... LOL I'snt Love a drag? LOL Touching write.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2001-07-01 10:13 AM

Jess

bittersweet write this was...but
i really enjoyed the read. the last
part really tied it all together nicely.
*smiles*

take care.
amy

"but i see your true colors,
shining through...
i see your true colors
and that's why i love you"
~phil collins~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2001-07-01 10:20 AM

welcome to passions

nice

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-07-01 06:53 PM

because memory is a vicious mistress. . .

superb telling and sharing of the feelings here. . . well done. . .

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