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SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

0 posted 2001-07-01 12:02 PM

Your eyes laugh --
A delicious chortle.
You deafen my pain.
I am the wanderer of your cheeks,
And oh how I wish I were lost.
I would climb on the folds of your tongue,
And tickle your taste buds,
And swim into Lethe.
I would find peace in your loving skin,
And grace in the crook of your shoulder.
Your fingers would trace
And quietly they'd speak
To the curves and the dips of my aching frame.
And forever I'd rest there
in your body's sweet repose,
worries lost, pain erased, love abiding to grow.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-07-01 12:34 PM

SmittenKitten~
This just has romance written all over it.
Nice job !

'Your eyes laugh --
A delicious chortle.'

LOVE the word 'chortle' ...
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-07-01 12:50 PM

You map out that landscape with your words very nicely. Beautiful write.

PM

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

3 posted 2001-07-01 12:54 PM

Marge ~ I love that word too!

Thank you for reading and sharing.

PM ~ Thank you very much!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-07-01 12:56 PM

How could I not respond to this????

Truly tho, Miss Smitten Kitten, this is lovely and sensuous writing...and the tranquility this exudes is a goal of mine.

(amongst several other goals which seem to cancel that out, but hey? I'M WORKING ON IT...LOL)

Enjoyed Much.

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

5 posted 2001-07-01 01:03 AM

Serenity ~ hehe, I was wondering much the same thing! Thank you very much for your kind words

I am sure you will reach that goal! Just don't give up! And hey, those other goals are just as important if they're making you happy right?

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-07-01 08:46 AM

Your pen is flowing wondrously....this is so enjoyable!

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2001-07-02 02:58 AM

SmittenKitten-
   ah yes...romance...gotta love it.
   very beautiful write..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

8 posted 2001-07-02 07:15 AM

Sunshine ~ I'm glad you enjoyed it

thank you so much

Vicky ~ that wishy washy stuff sure is lovely isn't it?

*hugs* back!

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