Open Poetry #14 |
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Freedom's Hues - Still Flying |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
~*Marge Tindal*~ ![]() Imagine if you will the shades of freedom I think in Red - White - and Blue Freedom sought at any cost represented in many hues From the dawn of early morn on the shores lit by Southern Light The flag still waves for freedom over graves laid in the night 'Oh, say can you see' a resemblance to being free paid for in magnanimous cost of the many lives that were lost 'By the dawn's early light' the victories of the fight Crosses standing row on row in the field where poppies grow 'What so proudly we hailed' when we pause to recall the badges of courage worn by them all 'At the twilight's last gleaming' the teardrops are streaming falling in memory tender in infamy shall we remember 'Whose broad stripes and bright stars' honors just who we are freedom defenders injustice menders 'Through the perilous fight' searching for freedom's purest light Leaving an honored part of a patriot's heart 'O'er the ramparts we watched' with diligent care Freedom, oh freedom are you still there 'Were so gallantly streaming' the colors of our dreaming of freedom's banner waving on our hearts' engraving 'And the rockets' red glare' tended us with care as the vigil we pursued the battle for freedom ensued 'The bombs bursting in air' resounding the reason we were there Fighting for the freedom for all to share 'Gave proof through the night' that freedom would see the light Whatever the loss Whatever the cost 'That our flag was still there' gave us pause to be among the land we fought to free 'O say, does that star-spangled banner yet wave O'er the land of the free and the home of the brave' Take a moment to honor those who gave their lives that it could be so~ July 4, 2001 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh yes....this is much, much better! Thank you for this, Marge! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
We celebrate our freedom on the fifth of May And on the fourth we have a two minute silence at eight o'clock throughout the whole country to remember the dead. Great poem you wrote Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- well, my friend...this is wonderful! ![]() i've decided, though, that we definitely think too much alike...LOL. you'll find a similiar post from me on these same pages...i PROMISE...i was NOT copying yours...rofl.. ![]() you've done an incredible job on this, my long lost sister.. ![]() love it! ![]() hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I thank you for enjoying it. I dug it up out of the archives and ran it up the flagpole ! ![]() Titia~ Thank you, friend, for joining us in celebration. Vicky~ Side-by-side Hand-in-hand I love it, Sis I think it's grand ! Love n' hugs ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
VERY..VERY..VERY IMPRESSIVE MARGE AND YES WE WILL REMEMBER THEM. |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: What a wonderful, patriotic poem! i love it. Says what the 4th is all about. Betty Lou Hebert |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Marge, What a beautiful and heartfelt tribute to all of those who have given us the freedom to be here today. My daughter sang on Memorial Day at our Town Hall, and there were many vets there, some in wheelchairs, some older than I could guess, and when the anthems were sung, the pride and tears in their eyes just gave you goosebumps and made you so proud. A beautiful poem. Elise |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SoaringEagle~ And ... I will remember with you on this day of Canadian celebration. I love you, my friend. BettyLou~ It's little enough homage paid for the freedoms we enjoy. Thank you. Athena4~ Yes ... I've been to those memorial services. Touches my heart to see their tears through my own. Thank you for your kind reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ya know, Marge, I'll bet Francis Scott Key is grinning from ear to ear. Me, i'm a sucker for anything patriotic. And what is more beautiful than "Old Gory" waving for all the world to see ... shouting the clarion call for freedom. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Thank you, friend. I think you'd also enjoy this one~ /pip/Forum48/HTML/002938.html It's a proud feeling to experience the love of country ... no matter how flawed her past ... there is hope for the future. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beauty this is... a visual and musical treat that goes straight to my heart... woven with your wonderful words. Well done, sweet lady! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thumbs up to you for this Marge beautiful tribute ![]() Rex |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks, Marge! ![]() |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And so they should be saluted for their bravery for making all free! And...I salute you for your tribute Marge, they deserve it. If I made you smile today then I did my job! |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
A well written tribute to those that have gone before. I enjoyed it. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Very wise and patriotic words Marge, wonderfully presented. I enjoyed thank you. Regards, Olias. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge what a well written tribute to the 4th and what it means to celebrate and remember... we are free! Deb |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ I am thrilled to share it with you, sweet friend. Rex~ Thank you so very much. Serenity~ Bunches of welcomes, honey. Mysteria~ Thank you, my friend. PassionsVoice~ The voice of honor sings them dearly. Thank you. OLIAS~ Thank you very much. BloomingRose~ It is an honor not afforded to all - May we ever be thankful ! *HAPPY 4TH TO YOU ALL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
![]() My pleasure ... and thank you~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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