Never forget who loved you best

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Open Poetry #14

Never forget who loved you best

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-06-30 06:27 PM

Secretly come to me
in my fantasy of a love that cannot be.
Do what you have to do,
walk away if you want to.
But please never forget,
who loved you best.
Return to me in dreams.
I'll conquer you there,
and you'll never escape this desire.
I'll sleep and don't wake up,
for if I do,
I'm sure I'll loose you.
I can't be shaken by this,
with you I want to be,
if only in my fantasies.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-06-30 06:47 PM

Sometimes it is the fantasies that make life sing sweeter words..Nice read, walker...gentle smiles

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-06-30 08:56 PM

I like this one walker. . . the secret fantasies that we hold inside. . .

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-07-01 05:36 AM

Its easy to live in these fantasies and when the truth comes to light we still want to hold on and believe in the fantasy...I know I do...when a friend of mine recently got married I found myself thinking to myself...well maybe it won't work out and she will be back in my life again...I keep wanting to hold on....James

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2001-07-01 10:09 AM

walker,
this was a really emotional
write...love the theme of dreams
and fantasies. here's to never having
to face reality

take care.
amy

"but i see your true colors,
shining through...
i see your true colors
and that's why i love you"
~phil collins~

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-07-01 12:22 PM

To live and love only in dream...how sadly poetic. Enjoyed and related.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-07-02 11:44 AM

Living and reliving in fantasy is not bad

Write on.

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