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| Open Poetry #14 |
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The Poet's Heart |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The poet’s heart beats strong with love Exuding mercy given from heaven above Each pulse sends out a signal true Meant to capture the love of you The poet’s heart is filled with compassion Its tenderness never goes out of fashion Always there with a listening ear To soothe your anxiety and lessen your fear The poet’s heart yearns for acceptance A soul in search of man’s repentance Capturing the essence of daily life Helping you cope with trials and strife The poet’s heart flows through her pen Allowing us to believe once again In a world so honest and pure She gives you the courage to endure The poet’s heart shines like the sun You think about her when your day is done Wondering what she’ll write that night Casting on your path the warmest light The poet’s heart is a fragile thing But with patience you can make it sing Songs filled with ancient lore Of all those who have gone before The poet’s heart feels your pain She knows when inside it starts to rain Drying your tears with her gentle hand Always showing she understands The poet’s heart shall live on Even after her life is gone For it is breathes through each word Every one your heart has heard The poet’s heart drifts on by Leaving a tear in my eye I’d give anything to see The poet’s heart live in me All writing comes |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
The poet’s heart is a fragile thing But with patience you can make it sing Songs filled with ancient lore Of all those who have gone before =============== The poet’s heart drifts on by Leaving a tear in my eye I’d give anything to see The poet’s heart live in me ================================== Lone wolf.......... This is really lovely.......I loved it The soft flow of it is just beautiful... You have expressed a poet's heart so truly and so wonderfully....... Thank you.....  **************************** It's only me.......only me |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Truly touching and accurate -- you have described what I have felt intuitively but have never stopped to contemplate or express. This is a very strong poem and worthy of many, many re-reads! -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ I got one of those ... AND SO DO YOU !  Loved this ... just loved it ! Your poetic  heart beats strong, loud and long !*Hugs* to you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
 you said it all and a lot more.....captured poets quite well with your words.Charisma |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I bow down to your poet's heart! This poem is great! I love it! ~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial) |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Live in you? Live in you? my stars above, THAT heart fills you...what a wonderful read. most very gentle smile..WELL DONE |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
One could not pen what you have without one. Now, can you tell me where to find one, slightly used, possibly on sale  |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Sweetie, I cant SEE my heart either, but it would be a neat thing to be able to do... so I hear you when you say you would give anything  But I tell you Jen, its worth much more just KNOWING whats inside yourself... warmth, love, caring and of course, not just "a" poets heart, but YOUR poetic heart  Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Who else could know a poets heart so well other then a Poet...wonderful expression...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is a wonderful expression of what a poet really is..inside.... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* Did I tell you yet that you're getting better and better every time I read? This one touched some place I could never explain. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Written by a true poetic heart,very well done! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Applause! You are a true poet with a big heart for writing awesome poetry! This is a keeper~Take care, Melissa~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is truly from the heart. It is a wonderful poem with so much feeling and truth. Very well written Liz |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Only a true poet could have penned such a poem. It's wonderful! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all very much for the kind replies. I appreciate each and every one of you. I was just sitting here the other morning when this one came to me. I guess it was something I'd been thinking about for a while. Glad you all enjoyed. All writing comes |
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