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When You're Not There
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When You're Not There |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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I lose all sense of direction Whenever I'm not with you I seem to be at a loss Not quite knowing what to do Everything loses its color Whenever you're not there The flowers lose their perfume And the trees they look so bare The sun forgets to shine The birds no longer sing My mood becomes very sombre No joy does this day bring The diamonds lose their lustre The sky is no longer blue Inside me it is raining As my heart it pines for you The moon has no silvery lining The sand is cold beneath my feet But all the colors will return to my life When you and I next meet Suetang |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Isn't it amazing how we perceive the world differently when we are with the one we love? Great write, Sue.  All writing comes |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Sue, than may the sun shine brightly, and the gentle wind blow free for you..gentle smile |
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