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A Moment In Time...
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A Moment In Time... |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL 
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A moment in time, a glimpse in the past Thinking too slow, reacting too fast Making assumptions, without even thinking Swimming to the top, yet always sinking Looking all around, and never seeing Knowing the truth, but never believing Having friends and lovers, and never caring Telling your thoughts, but still never sharing Standing straight, but losing your balance Leaving your life in the hands of chance A moment in time, a glimpse in the past Thinking too slow, reacting too fast What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Cool write. Concise and relevant. I like. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like this, Jessica - Your theme/refrain is quite effective.. I also like the format... I'll be reading more of your work... Nicely done..  |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Thank you very much Nan...  What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Oh yea... I have a post in Critical Analysis that no one has replied to... Plese go and tell me what you think. What don't kill you can only make you stronger... [This message has been edited by Jessica (edited 06-29-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jessica~ Welcome to Passions. Enjoyed the flow of your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Always go for the gut feeling, it is never wrong. Heart and mind might be, but not the gut...gentle smile..nice read |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Jessica, this is definately going into my library. The flow, the rhyme, and the theme is excellent. And welcome to Passions Take care, Melissa~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh, this one's a keeper! Excellent work!! All writing comes |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Impressive, indeed! I will certainly be looking for your work...this is very well done, Jessica |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Such intruiging words Jessica. Seems like there is some confusion, but who doesn't have that  Beautiful write and I hope to see more of your work in the future. Thanks for the read.hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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