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0 posted 2001-06-29 04:16 PM



music is playing
soft, slow, seductive tempo
pull me close to you

~*~

nuzzling to your neck
breathing in your manly scent
as we start to sway

~*~

your hand finds my hair
and makes my heart skip a beat
~my breath catch on sigh

~*~

in perfect rhythm.....
with each step...I'm lost in you
lost to the romance

~*~

time has no meaning
dancing here with you tonight
this is all I need

~*~

it doesn't matter
that the music has finished
we have just begun.........


~SEA~


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1 posted 2001-06-29 04:21 PM


Now darnit!!! As Iambe told you all... I never did learn to dance...

Would love to... but...

I would dance freely
In love’s sweet embrace,
But the rhythms get tangled
And I fall on my face.


I would sing love songs
If I knew the words,
But the melody is muffled
The music unheard.


So I will write poems
To share with a few.
Word woven tapestries
especially for you.

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2 posted 2001-06-29 04:24 PM


*sigh* (love that)  

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3 posted 2001-06-29 04:25 PM


enjoying your mood...(laughing)

you seem to be quite on the up... and it is nice to see people happy


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4 posted 2001-06-29 04:28 PM


my muse is tickling me!!  
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5 posted 2001-06-29 04:31 PM


(laughing) Well then I would say you and your muse are very fortunate..

Come dance with me
round moonbeams and stars
we'll trip o'er venus
and spill onto mars
Come dance with me
for my heart it is light
the music is heavenly
but my shoes... are too tight

(ouch!!!)

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6 posted 2001-06-29 04:33 PM


then kick your shoes off and follow my lead..........  
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7 posted 2001-06-29 04:36 PM


Now after me wearing these shoes all day..I'm not sure you want me to kick them off...

(laughing)

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8 posted 2001-06-29 04:41 PM


ok........I give up.....stinky toes wins LOL  
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9 posted 2001-06-29 04:50 PM


The whole room thanks you.... ( laughing)


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10 posted 2001-06-29 06:09 PM


so ummm, don't you have odor eaters? LOL  
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11 posted 2001-06-29 06:15 PM


LOVED this    Isnt it amazing all the feeling and emotion that can start or be had from just a dance?  Love that and especially love your write dear  

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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12 posted 2001-06-29 06:21 PM


Thunderkyss~ I love to slow dance..... I'm glad you liked this   thank you  
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13 posted 2001-06-29 06:29 PM


Yes, it is truly a wonderous thing    Funny how even after the music stops, once your locked into the mood, you dont even need music... just a 'lil rythm and closed eyes accompanied by a wandering mind and it's all good.  Once your started, really getting into it all, the thing I HATE most of all is when the music switches back to fast pace stuff... right when your feeling all sappy   LOL
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14 posted 2001-06-29 06:43 PM


yes, exactly......sometimes you just gotta go with it and ignore the music.....just follow the feelings  
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15 posted 2001-07-01 05:31 AM


I like this action poetry...James
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16 posted 2001-07-01 07:29 AM


Nice write.

Time and place meant nothing, together we were one
The music came but finished, but night had just begun

Rick

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17 posted 2001-07-01 10:14 AM


nice work
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18 posted 2001-07-01 03:43 PM


My husband always says he don't know how to dance, but give him a slow song and he takes me into his arms and.........you know the ending
Enjoyed this very much.

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