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Angers Echoes |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
What whispered echoes dance among these walls, precipitous and jagged, so that even screams become broken muffled measures of indistinct reason? Do these words you speak softly fall on deaf ears and hardened mind? I fear... even soft edged thoughts will break into shards... fragile sharp that slice a tender heart. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Sir, you did not tell the ladies to walk in carefully before they faced the mirror of their souls... This is a very well done, and profound, piece. Thank you. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - this hits hard, very well expressed! Take care, Melissa~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great poem... "I fear... even soft edged thoughts will break into shards... fragile sharp that slice a tender heart. " That's very clever writing! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What whispered echoes dance among these walls, precipitous and jagged, =================== I fear... even soft edged thoughts will break into shards... fragile sharp that slice a tender heart. =============================== this is a very cool piece... succinct and sharp stark vivid imagery contrasted with the emote I really like the edge this one has on it. impressive write well done poet sir jm We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I do think I've experienced times like this...when it just won't matter what is said, it will seem wrong and it will hurt like falling on sharp edges. Well done! Very powerful! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lady... We face the mirror each and every time we look inside someone words do we not? I thank you sincerly for the comments. Melissa: Thank you... Et... I do not believe anyone has ever accused me of clever writing before.. I now have no idea how I will ever be "clever" again...and must I fear..put down my pen.. (grinning) Thank you... coming from you it is high praise.. Janet.. thank you! Glad you enjoyed... it was written some time ago and it spoke what I felt. VAS.. Kind of you to drop by and read. Glad you found it in some way relevant. Thanks to all of YOU!!! |
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