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Sweet Intoxication
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Sweet Intoxication |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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The night was warm and inviting The moon was full and ripe The setting for our loving Would be basked in candlelight The spicy smell of incense Drifted above us on the bed Rose petals adorned my pillow As you tenderly lay down my head My lips were warm and inviting As you pressed your lips to mine Your eyes were filled with sensuality In the candlelight, how they shine The closeness we experience As or bodies are entwined How I love it when your fingers Around my face they outline We move so well together Our souls dance in the candlelight Your love is all I'll require On this wonderfully romantic night Intoxicated by our passion So much more of you I'll yearn We have many more hours of loving to enjoy And much more to explore and learn Suetang |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
very nice write. i like the mood your poetry puts me in. your flow is quite fluid. "Intoxicated by our passion" is perfect. job well done. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Very romantic mood. enjoyed. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Suetang..this drifts and drips in romance.. nicely written. I enjoyed the read and hope you find many many hours to explore and enjoy just what you have described.. thanks for the read! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is openly sensual and provocative. Yet, I really enjoyed the passion within! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
very tender. "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all and I'm glad you all liked the romance in this one. It's not hard to guess I'm a hopeless romantic is it? Take care......Sue Suetang |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sue? It's not a good night to do this to me! SIGH SIGH (frustration) sigh.... very lovely, a slow dance of a poem!  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very passionate write, Sue. All writing comes |
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