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Stones and Twisted Sticks
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Stones and Twisted Sticks |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Stones and Twisted Sticks tree of life with twisted sticks bleeding heart held together by bricks sticks of time bent from weight bow and bend but do not break jagged stones that are my own others are... boulders thrown these stones and sticks I shall keep my wall grows strong I am not weak "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 06-28-2001).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I thought this was beautifully written. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
Hi! neat poem! but, geez! do i have to remind everybody? let 'em throw rocks, you know better...  tom |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nice poem and nice delivery! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... always enjoy your words... like the tree of life built of twisted stick image.. Twine together these vines that grow from seed we planted so long ago Love to read..and yours are always among my favorites.. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Different take...loved it! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed you are not. . . I like this one. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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