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Open Poetry #14

Wrecked

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-06-28 07:23 PM

Wrecked

Put me back together
Gather each broken piece
Find the truth of my pain
Along the search
If you find my heart
Hold it gently, tenderly
Treat it, mend it
If somehow I fail again
To be whole
I'll know that you held
This wrecked heart
In the palm of your hand

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-28 07:34 PM

so tender my gosh.....brought tears to my eyes........ hugs

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2001-06-28 10:29 PM

Let me get some super glue! It's too bad we have to suffer this kind of pain...you wrote it well.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-06-28 10:36 PM

Ahh, a wonderful read, thank you so much for the words you spoke, very nicely done...gentle smile

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

4 posted 2001-06-28 10:56 PM

Very well written. I liked it very much plus i know exactly where you are coming from.

*hugs*

ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

5 posted 2001-06-29 12:12 PM

Love the helpless but calm and tender pleading of this one... truly a lonely feeling my friend. Nice job

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