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Dreams of Adult Children
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Dreams of Adult Children |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: Dreams of Adult Children In the quiet of the night Plays the patterns of the day. Bringing fantasies to light In a phantom of display. Romance blooms on every tide Hero's come from out the blue. Fear is lost and put aside And our world reshapes anew. Outlandish things bow, preform Valley's greenest carpets lay The impossible now norm With knights and Queens on display. Time has changed its aging score Of the children we once were Now we dream in adults store Fantasies that we prefer. So pour your dreams in measured gold And all its magic will unfold. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Enjoyed this Seymour... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Randy fed you well again last night... Well done! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"So pour your dreams in measured gold And all its magic will unfold." Wonderful sentiments Seymour, and a beautiful rhythm and flow. I so enjoy your work!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
This dream world I'd seek be enrolled, a kinder place the truth be told. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, Just a little cotton candy. Thank you Sunshine, Yes Randy flies me there whenever I wish. *L* Kit, Just a spoon of sugar for the mornings coffee RSWells, You are enrolled, it's free. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Have you been looking in on my private dreams again, Sy? I don't mind sharing, but, I mean ... Enjoyed the read my friend. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In the quiet of the night Plays the patterns of the day. Bringing fantasies to light In a phantom of display. ============================ Time has changed its aging score Of the children we once were Now we dream in adults store Fantasies that we prefer. So pour your dreams in measured gold And all its magic will unfold. ========================== you dream in golden vision...and then you pen it so that we may too... thank you for that Sy-babes.  me~~~~~~~~~~ *for Randy...*winkiewinkie*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper, Dreams are a commonality, I may have. JM, Randy cut out your picture and hung it on the wall. You are his favorite pin up. And mine too. Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is exceptional work, my friend... liked this immensely regards, sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Thank you my friend. |
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