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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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Full Moon Rising My past still burns like a child crying, It will always be part of me; My future shines like a full moon rising, Who knows who I am to be? My mind yearns for the light it's finding, And as if on cue; My heart longs like the river winding, So thunderstruck by you. art: www.lindysgraphics.net © Mysteria 1999 "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Poetically perfect! Loved the graphic too, as always your presentation is just beautiful! HUGS...and my continued gratitude for your kindness! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ And I am just MOONSTRUCK with the BEAUTY of this poem ! Oh ... I snitched the graphic too !  This is really pretty~ Couldn't help but notice - © Mysteria 1999 Makes it kinda special ... for I do feel your 'moon' is on the rise, my friend~  Love n' stuff~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
We are all products of our past and proteges of our future...James |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
I loved this  And the graphic set it off perfectly.may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
A lovely piece of vision, engulfing the spirit to journey with its words. Nice work. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very beautiful Sharon ... a lovely inspirational piece to start my morning, thank you! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lovely poem of hope and longing Brought alive by your open heart Liz |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Nicely written. Pretty picture, too. Melton |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
This was a warming and enchanting message, Sharon, gracefully and delicately soothing to the spirit...very, very beautiful. The background was awesome, and complimented the theme of your words perfectly! Hugs and smiles to you, and much love, Dawn |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
It can be so painful..... this is such a beautiful way of expressing your heart... love this hugs to you SEA |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thank you all for reading and your comments are most appreciated, and life can sometimes be full of obstacles, but that is what makes it life I suppose, but one does get a tad tired of jumping hurdles sometimes don't they? Thank you all again. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sharon- this is such a beautiful poem, and what a wonderful graphic you've chosen to compliment it.. loving this... hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice Mysteria!......we might have a picture contest with you and Janet Marie and Marge at the top of the list! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Short and sweet. The poem as well. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Vicky: Thank you, glad you liked this one. ethome: Boy, I better get my act together then, if I am to compete with those two. I think Janet Marie has the largest stash of graphics on the net, he he, and I luv them! Richard: You forgot sugar and spice and everything nice! Have a great weekend!  "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Ain't love grand? Enjoyed this write much. All writing comes |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah Lone Wolf - hmmm - if I remember - yes it was LOL, been a while my friend, but I love to write about it, as I LOVE love! And yes, absolutely, there is nothing in the world like love, especially a child's love! Thank you for reading this one. "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This reminds me, Mysteria, and especially based on the comments, that if you ever catch the movie "The Evening Star", a sequel to "Terms of Endearment", you will see what I saw in this beautiful poem of yours. And I'm never going to believe you again. You said you just "fool around" with your poetry. Well shucks girl...fool around some more...because THIS.... is the real thing! |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
future bright as day moonglow assures your future light source is El Sol Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
aha, Sharon - you little devil you - It's good to see the thunder - way to go, Lady! This poem flowed so very well. |
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esclandre Member
since 2001-06-11
Posts 62Northern California |
serendipity Esclandre |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
extremely well done... tight compact..and the ending lines tie it all together... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sunshine: Shucks! It is? Honest, was fooling around with some words (on a napkin actually in a restaurant waiting for dessert - lol), thank you. lunatic: Thank you for that, I kept it! Long John: He he, yup it zapped me into stop thinking like this it did! Thank you sir. Esclandre: Thanks, and know what? You just inspired me with that one word! If I have made you smile today, then I have done my job! ~* Mysteria *~ |
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