Open Poetry #14 |
Love's Aftermath . . . senryu |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
peacefully quiet bodies with glistening sheen relax together Live for love. Without love, you don't live. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 05-19-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
saunas could have been the mien for sizzling sighs titled otherwise [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 05-19-2001).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
blissful sighs follow the screams of passion we shared just moments ago ~SEA |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
smoking cigarette turning over in the bed goodnight dear, sleep tight! couldn't resist! ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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IceNeyes New Member
since 2001-05-20
Posts 9 |
There is an after I did not in truth such know Love I thought was All |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
WOW!!! The ecstasy of the moment is told powerfully in exquisitely few words! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Math..After when All is yet calm the After love forges one plus one together "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Interloper, A wonderfully sensual haiku! I loved it |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine ~ so, source sizzling sighs sagatious symbolism saunas synergize SEA ~ passionate screaming turn to sighs of contentment given tender love Mysteria ~ smoke your cigarette but not in my bed, madam I still breathe to live IceNeyes ~ I think love is all we live and die for our loves we should do no less VAS ~ Wow is powerful it expresses all in one thank you kind lady Wynter ~ one and one is two at the least, and could be more like infinity Rosepetals25 ~ Thank you for the read the first time for you I think your comment adored. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This one just has to continue to be read. Powerfully tender. I enjoyed it. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Interloper--A pleasant image painted with this. Nicely done. Poeminister |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Tempress ~ Thank you for the read and your too kind comment. Poeminister ~ Thank you very much. Been a long time since I have heard from you. Thanx for stopping by Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
kewl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You said it...James |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
WOW! KOOL! Nice Job! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
BrightStar ~ Thanx James ~ Yes, I did, didn't I? Watersign6 ~ *sigh* Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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