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0 posted 2001-06-27 08:17 PM



A flash of light
Races across the sky
Illuminating all there is to see

The roll of thunder
Low and sure
Echoing through one’s essence
Echoing far and beyond

Clouds seemingly alive
As they roll across the sky
Pierced by shafts of light

Skyfire ripping across the sky
Charging the air with energy
Blinding the sky with light

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*sighs*  College's a pain... esp. during the summer.  Anyways, just thought I'd drop in and take a peek!  ^_^  

"Dreams are the touchstones of our characters"
-Henry David Thoreau



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1 posted 2001-06-27 08:22 PM


been watching the clouds most of the day.........ummmm, love this kind of weather   nicely done!  
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2 posted 2001-06-27 10:19 PM


Artistic~
Nice imagery.
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2001-07-01 07:12 PM


hi there. . .  

love this one. . . I've always had this thing for storms. . . nice to see you again. . .

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