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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-06-27 10:17 AM

You,
that supremely
special sweet
secretly, steamily,
holding my neat,
wishful heart.
I
affix but a thread
afraid to untether.
“Tis the pain I dread
if I be bellwether.
Yet I pray for
us
to accept the offering,
one to the other,
knowing our hearts’ coffering,
of this our smother.
Our unspoken feelings.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-06-27 10:18 AM

The receiver of this, is a very special person in your heart....

may she live

on....

a lovely write...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-06-27 10:21 AM

Interloper,
Amen to that. Enjoyed

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-06-27 10:21 AM

wow........couldn't possibly be more romantic....sigh...

this is beautiful

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-06-27 11:03 AM

oooooooooh, lovely
rest in the silence
together

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-06-27 11:06 AM

"You,
that supremely
special sweet
secretly, steamily,
holding my neat,
wishful heart.
I
affix but a thread
afraid to untether"

Nicely written and turned... romantic and sensual without the obvious ( which is my department)...

As always I enjoyed....

Light on heart
shines from you
I am illuminated

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2001-06-28 06:29 PM

love such unspoken feelings...warm touch of love found within.

Charisma

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

7 posted 2001-06-29 03:33 PM

interloper, so sweet so beautiful.

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

8 posted 2001-06-29 07:05 PM

Well written...

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2001-06-29 07:46 PM

mmmm...love the tension of that too...ouch.

but a sweet and delectable ouch...

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-06-29 10:22 PM

Lovely write, Interloper. She inspires your muse quite nicely.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

11 posted 2001-06-29 10:42 PM

Interloper, this is superb! A very lovely read...

~Tier

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2001-06-30 01:43 PM

Lady ~ Amen.

Sy ~ I will accept all amens. Thank you

SEA ~ NO? then I have finally reached the pinnacle? OK, now I can quit

VAS ~ Thank you, dear lady

Ron ~ You are illuminated by a very deserved spotlight

Charisma ~ I'm glad you understand. Thank you

Brian ~ Thank you for the read. Don't remain a stranger. We Irish must stick together

Jessica ~ Thank you

Serenity ~ Yes, it hurts so good

Lone Wolf ~ Ok, you can blame my Muse for this

Tiers ~ Wow! Gee, thanx

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

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