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You...................In The Wind............
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You...................In The Wind............ |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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The silky dance of wind through trees this soft gentle blowing breeze caressing light upon my face reminisce another time another place it becomes your laughter happy and free once again.........(or is it still) a part of me dance romance of chime of rhyme given to me a remember of time call of birds fly on high quiet mindful soulful sigh reminding me you said good-bye ~SEA~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes.....this just about says it all....in a very soft and tender way.... What can I say....you have grown SO much in your writings..... I'm so proud of you! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Sunshine.....your poetry guides my way  |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
and I sighed........... Thank you dear Sea for such a softly said words of memory..... Thank you ************************** It's only me.......only me |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I don't know that I would want to be reminded of this. . . Heartfelt and bittersweet. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh Sea, this has such a tender sadness. Don't even know if these are the right words for what I felt while reading. ((BIG HUGS)) to you Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I think it is still yes? This was so soft and lovely. Yanno Sea, anyone whose life you touch must surely be blessed, as I always see your "love light" in all that you write. A very poignant poem, that I enjoyed very, very much. And remember still. "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." ~ Hopi ~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 06-27-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ When the memories are written in such a way for you not to forget .........it is still Enjoyed the softness of your thoughts, sweet poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, SEA, so utterly tender of thought...gentle smile |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Silken in rhyme and flow. Lovely write. PM "..And deem each hour to musing given a step upon the road to Heaven" --Sir Walter Scott [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-27-2001).] |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...what thoughts this evokes of the memories the pines whisper to me... "...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The silky dance of wind through trees this soft gentle blowing breeze caressing light upon my face reminisce another time another place =========================== beautiful Sea-girlie...in imagery and inspire... love the rhyme flow in this bittersweet recall of the heart... those traces left behind... they always evoke the best poetry from our muse...and this gem proves that point... ditto sun on the growth comment... very well done poetess of the sea  I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ahhhhhh SEA ~ Simply put...Beautiful!!! Bonnie |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"Wow! 1derful!" he said, choking on the dust |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
MEM~ thank you Sven~ I don't have a choice, it's not something I can control Titia~ thank you Mysteria~ yes, still, thank you SO MUCH Marge~ yes, thank you  Logan~  thank you PM~  thank youFancy~ and to me thank you Janet~ wow.... thank you Bonnie~ thank you good to see you! Interloper thank you......dust???? ~SEA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A bittersweet beauty, SEA... I like this very much! *S* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... an enjoyable read which says so much to those who look and think.. this one I will read again.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always whisper with love and music! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may true love forever more whisper to your heart with a warm welcome! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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