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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2001-06-25 10:33 PM




Honesty is the policy
Whether good better or best
So let me have it from you
Come on, get it off your chest

Don't prance around the subject
Let me have it on the chin
Tell me the truth, I dare you!
Your words won't do me in

How can we have this thing?
A relationship made of air
If you won't tell me how it is
Won't tell me if you care

So go ahead and mumble
Look down and scuff your toes
Stop the lies between us
From now on, honest knows!


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vlraynes
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1 posted 2001-06-26 12:22 PM


Sharon-
   Another great write with a
   very loud voice...
   i can certainly relate to the
   feelings within this one.
  
   HONESTLY...I love it!  

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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2 posted 2001-06-26 12:23 PM


you are SO on it tonight   Loving these!  
Elizabeth
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3 posted 2001-06-26 12:32 PM


Yes it is....well done Sharon.  
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4 posted 2001-06-26 12:47 PM


"The Truth is out there", and it's also in here, and in your words.  A friend just quoted a cool one:  "When you tell the truth, you don't have to remember what you just said."  Enjoyed this one and vehementy agree.  Boy are there stories to tell...

-MVS

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"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

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5 posted 2001-06-26 06:46 PM


great words. . .

you were on a roll weren't you??



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6 posted 2001-06-26 08:06 PM


Ok this is a second post of yours that I read that suggests there is a partner.  Is there one?

hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

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