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Mother Goose Visits the Poetry Workshop
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Mother Goose Visits the Poetry Workshop |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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ring around the rosy a pocketful of rhyme rumplestiltskin's spinning gold one limerick at a time jack and jill went up the hill and when they reached the summit jack fell down on bended knee and sang to jill a sonnet little miss muffet sat on her tuffet penning a simple senryu while the itsy bitsy spider spun a shimmering web of haiku humpty dumpty sat on the wall composing a paradelle before he could write the very last line he slipped off the wall and fell...his head did swell little jack horner sat in the corner reciting a lovely free-verse when out of the night a villian'elle's squall incited the crowd to disperse oh curse! ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-27-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ You MUST give up the raspberry flavored hot chocolate after 6 p.m.  Delightful ... and ya' darned well know it ! Got me grinning from ear to ear ! LOVE it ... just what we needed in here tonight ! Love n' hugs n' stuff~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Victoria, a little poetry on the brain tonight?  I think it's great!  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- LOL @ you! how about if i SHARE my raspberry hot chocolate with YOU?  ya can't beat that deal!! lol i'm so glad you enjoyed this one so much and am VERY HAPPY that it put a great big grin on your face! love and hugs to you, my sweet friend. Balladeer- it's an honor to have you read me, kind sir.. so happy you enjoyed it.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-25-2001).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Okay now it is essential I come to your place for the rasberry hot chocolate (what do you put in that stuff, rhyming powder?) Now, just how cute was this? And...I adore rhymes and fairytales, so this was fun!"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Absolutely delightful! |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Thank you for the smile this morning. An enjoyable read, indeed. Melton |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ooh, ooh, Just lovin' this one, great way to start my day! Bonnie |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
vlraynes, you have written such a fun poem! I loved it from the first word to the last. HHHUUUMMMM raspberry.....anything like Janet Marie's tea? Great one, ME |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is so charming! I must know where you purchase that beverage! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mysteria- LOL @ rhyming powder!  come on over anytime...i'll keep the raspberry hot chocolate ready for ya! LOL thanks so much for the reply, my friend! i'm so happy you enjoyed this one! hugs to you.. ethome- thanks so much... glad you enjoyed... Melton- glad to know this one gave you a smile.. makes me smile just knowing that.. thanks so much for reading. Bonnie- it's so great to see your name on a reply! thanks for reading...really happy you're lovin' this... MotherEarth- hmmmmm...could be similiar to JM's tea i suppose...just never been much of a tea drinker myself...LOL. thanks so much for reading! glad you found this one fun! it was fun for me as well!!  Lady In White- safeway, my friend...i stock up on my raspberry hot chocolate at safeway! lol thanks so much for the kind reply and for 'charming'.. hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-27-2001).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Too Kewl... Who's dg? |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Nan- thanks a bunch! glad you enjoyed this fun little ditty. dg is dgvarner...she's the one who first told me about this site, and talked me into posting here. she's been a very good friend to me for about 12 years now. this picture was taken about 10 years ago. ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This/these are DELIGHTFUL, absolutely enjoyed the reading of them, all the way through!! how clever of you! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
way cool far out groovy poem!! i like i like!! fun fun fun!! youre just full of silly...  my favorite is the first verse thats great...!! glad your back tricks!! hugs, g ps..gotta love that pic...teehee no i wont be afraid. no i...wont be afraid, just as long as you stand, stand by me... -ben e king [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 06-27-2001).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
VAS- thanks so much for the kind reply. so happy you enjoyed this! dg- hey there, friend of mine... thanks for stopping in to read my silly little rhyme. you even put a little green hoppy thingy!! ya gotta love that!!! LOL yeppers...thought you might like that pic. say cheese!! love and big hugs to you... hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'll give anybody a medal that can rhyme haiku and senryu!!! LOL love this one. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lisa Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 88Lunenburg,VT USA |
I loved  this! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sven- LOL...well, thank you kind sir.. so glad you enjoyed! Lisa- thanks so much... really glad you like it. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky--what an afternoon delight...thank you! |
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