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New Again |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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New Again simple as a baby’s blink comes fast enticing wink heard upon the thunder’s storm quick as night comes to morn everything begins as new again old becomes mold, wisped away stories become legend, given say one wanders aimlessly through a day allow not my feet to become as clay everything turns to new again microscopic notations abound life quivers underground living things reach for the light then soak in the cool of night everything quickens to new again not for us to match time’s moments nor say when we should lose our torments but to take upon a chance in our desires to flash awake our inherent fires everything comes to new again join me in the here and now seek the changes, and I’ll avow to see in my eyes the twinkling scene as everything becomes new again |
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Fandaen Junior Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 47Ft Worth, Texas |
A wonderful message of hope. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Refreshing thoughts. Nicely written. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Gentle smile, is not each turning of the pathways, being new again? Very provocative, Sissie, nice thoughts and ponderings..gentle smile |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
not for us to match time’s moments nor say when we should lose our torments but to take upon a chance in our desires to flash awake our inherent fires everything comes to new again join me in the here and now seek the changes, and I’ll avow to see in my eyes the twinkling scene as everything becomes new again ==================================== count me in... love the hope, renewal and anticipation in this Sun... almost makes a moth a believer   I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Karilea, I love the message this poem conveys. It is such good writing!  Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lovely, gentle thoughts within this, and the last before bed, thanks Karilea. "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ You know I like the uplifting renewal of this piece. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Karilea You are a ray of sunshine in this old world.....I love this one! |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sunshine .... Passions seems all about the simplicity of climate this morning. Well done. Bob |
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