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athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

0 posted 2001-06-24 09:11 PM

Summer Rain

A mist of gentle warmth caresses me.
The melody of drops sing a sweet song in my ears.
The scent of cleansing and newness arouse my senses.
A million diamonds falling from the sky
create a vision of beauty and awe for my eyes
to bask in.

And all I want to do is share this majestic
gift with you.
...Where are you?

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-06-24 09:45 PM

I hope you find him soon!! This was very romantic!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

2 posted 2001-06-24 09:57 PM

Very Sweet I hope you find him/her soon sounds like you have something special to share

Julie

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

3 posted 2001-06-24 10:14 PM

Ah yes, the OTHER "three magic words"... Seek, and you shall find -- see, and you shall bind. Very quaint imagery, Elise.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear; few can listen."

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2001-06-24 10:49 PM

athena-
ya know...i've been asking the same thing..

very softly written..

enjoyed this.

~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

5 posted 2001-06-25 12:06 PM

...your thoughts I share...I love rain, and the most romantic thing I have ever shared is "dancing in the rain"....very good writing!

"...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..."
Warmly...
Fancy

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-06-25 12:12 PM

Lovely writing, and image herein...enjoyed very much.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-06-25 08:56 AM

Pretty poem, and someday he will be standing with you all the time. KTDA
S

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-06-25 07:11 PM

coming with an umbrella. . .

loved this one Elise. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2001-06-26 01:12 AM

Beautiful! I live in Vancouver where it rains all but two months a year, so we don't grow old here, we just rust! This was a great read.

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

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