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Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16
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0 posted 2001-06-24 05:55 PM



I try my best to traslate my poems into english in the same rythem and words which they have in URDU.
Not making them pharases or trying to put them in english sequence.
WAFA
Faith


Faluq pay koe sawan ki ghuta chae hay phir say
On the sky there is lowering of black clouds of rainy season once again
Kushk putoon pay ik bahaar si chae hay phir say
On the dry leaves there is spreading a spring once again  

Piyar ki munzal main ayyamay judae panay k bad
In the way (destination) of love, after having a separation
Punkhari ik gulab ki muskurae hay phir say
A petal of rose is smiling once again

Main nay to Dastanay gum ko chara tha yunhi
By chance I started the story of sorrows
Aap kiun ho gaey they muj say hafa phir say
Why you become angry with me once again

Jurri barsat ki lug gae thi mari aankhoon say
It started rain continually from my eyes
Waqtay rukhsat jub howay they tum juda phir say
On the time of separation, when you separated from me

Ahday zindgi banday ja rhay hain aaj phir Waseem
The Promises of life are being made again Waseem  
Doo dilloon mainho rhai hay na wafa phir say
A faith is being kept between two hearts once again


                          ~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

© Copyright 2001 Wasee Ashraf Cheema - All Rights Reserved
helen smith
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1 posted 2001-06-25 02:53 AM


i love how you    find  promise in the seasons that everything will take its course and will be ....and that true love will also take its course ....inshaallah  
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2 posted 2001-06-25 12:22 PM


Wasi this was simply lovely, and it translate to "love" in any language!

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

illusion
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since 2001-06-19
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3 posted 2001-06-25 12:32 PM


This is very beautiful.   I have the utmost respect for poets who can create beauty in more than one language - well done.
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