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Chances are..... |
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The meek Junior Member
since 2001-06-22
Posts 16Australia |
Chances are the governments lying, Chances are your parents are trying, Chances are that love will find you, Chances are the worst is behind you, Chances are that life won’t be fair, Chances are your friends really care, Chances are you’ve been hurt once or more, Chances are you will break the law, Chances are you’re holding feelings in, Chances are everyone will sin, Chances are you’re scared of advances, Chances are you don’t take enough chances. We must read the lines before we read between the lines. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Chances are I was so in envy of this...and I already take too many chances. Yes! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Chances are you don’t take enough chances" Wonderful cadence and flow, and an excellent ending line ... much to ponder. Very much enjoyed this, well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Chances are this shall find its way into many libraries... it's good to have you here! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
This is an excellent poem...wonderfully written with a fantastic message! Thanks for sharing this with us... sp  I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TheMeek~ Well, Chances Are that my thoughts immediately sprang to Johnny Mathis and his beautiful rendition of this classic song ... Welcome to Passions ...  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Chances are.....there is so much truth in this..... Thank you ********************** It's only me.......only me |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You have spoke many truths here, meek. Chances are.....I loved this for the purity of it all. All writing comes |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS ENJOY |
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