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Too Quiet?
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Too Quiet? no, not really, no, not too quiet ~ mind is just working under spin of needling thoughts functioning and operational it is, indeed and I am not displeased to be quiet for I am gathering the moments to gyrate gold and liken to the rays that warm something for your soul to sparkle off the somber pool is to find diamonds and not froth quiet not to see storm clouds turn black but to see one cloud gleam brightly in reflection quiet center into the middle behind the eyes closed not toward the back of the mind but there center that spot where you can flick lightly with a feather’s touch close your eyes center and your mind will take you to poetic reverie and your body will pursue and your pen will pour quiet where it is never too quiet but just quiet enough write with grace, all others lose face; |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
for I am gathering the moments to gyrate gold and liken to the rays that warm something for your soul to sparkle off the somber pool is to find diamonds and not froth ========================== WOW...Brillant silence Lady... what a cool premise this is...your pen speaks volumes poetess white  I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Nice job!Yes your pen speaks loud and clear! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW this is good!!! quiet where it is never too quiet but just quiet enough These must have been written for me, at least they should have(lol) Do caresses your quiet moments Lady in White because they are so important. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I know this quiet and you've desribed it well. Thank you for this. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lady- that's some intense silence..  i'm liking this alot!  ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a beautifully tranquil read Lady. The flow of your words complemented your sentiments perfectly, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I know the joy of quiet, seldom truely obtained in the city, but quiet enough for thoughts. Enjoyed. Gloom |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I shall wait to see the product of the silence patiently Nicely done. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
There is much comfort to be found in the quiet if we take the time to find out. All writing comes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ When in quiet my name is spoken I treasure the true-measure of silent token I gleam a seaming of ever-dreaming penning from within fleeting thoughts of whim Never am I alone for long with muses tenderly calling me home Gawd ... I LOVE an overdose of inspiration ! ! Thank you, gentle lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
Sometimes there isn't enough silence. *+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~ -Publilus Syrus*+* [This message has been edited by FoxXena (edited 06-24-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful! Now let me be quiet ... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
a beautiful way to say still waters run deep..... |
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