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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-06-23 11:15 AM

Wavering Fluctuations

in desire to bend round an angle
curve the mirrors of your stare
spin your gaze into a quest
in all of this, rotate beware

spool along the illuminate
fluctuate with equine equate
waver on in rippled streams
fetch along a tinge of dream

shilly-shally within your fate
unearthing me in your sublimate
then when all is said and done
harbor you within my sun

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-06-23 11:16 AM

Awesome. Just awesome.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-06-23 11:28 AM

spool along the illuminate
fluctuate with equine equate
waver on in rippled streams
fetch along a tinge of dream

shilly-shally within your fate
unearthing me in your sublimate
then when all is said and done
harbor you within my sun
=============================

ahh that muse of yours just toys with us...
this poem is so very cool...loved the rhyme scheme and flow..as well as the vocab...
well done poetess sun

I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep.
I'm in too far, I'm in way too deep over you.
You'll always be the one.
You were the first, you'll be the last.

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-06-23 01:08 PM

you are awesome!!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-06-24 08:15 AM

Two awesomes and a gypsy moth who never fails to alight on me....thank you all!

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2001-06-25 10:49 PM

Care for three awesomes?

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 2001-06-25 11:32 PM

fourth awesome here....is there such a thing as an unwavering fluctuation?

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2001-06-26 07:49 AM

Wonderful word play and composition here.. loved this one

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

8 posted 2001-06-26 09:17 AM

What Interloper said. Bob

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-06-26 10:04 AM

Yes, to what they said

Truly enjoyed.
Sandra

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2001-06-26 10:07 AM

Karilea~

This just rolls
then it rocks
Wafting merrily
back to the top !

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

11 posted 2001-06-26 12:11 PM

a fifth AWESOME here...

really...

regards,
sudhir

"I was born intelligent - education ruined me"

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