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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-05-23 01:30 PM

Haiku

Ribbiting frogs croak
Birds in song on sweet wing fly
Bluebells greet the sky

Senryu

Time thy moment gone
All said empty are thy hands
Shifting sands passed through

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-23 01:48 PM

I love bluebells, what lovely thoughts here!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-05-23 01:51 PM

beautifully done Sunshine!

SEA

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

3 posted 2001-05-23 01:59 PM

Wonderful images with these. Nicely done.

Poeminister

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-05-23 03:27 PM

Very nice imagery.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2001-05-23 04:13 PM

Which is a good reason to make each moment count for something. Loved this, Karilea. Nice work.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

6 posted 2001-05-23 04:56 PM

Love them.

Titia

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-05-25 12:47 PM

frogs on lily pads
songbirds fly on feathered wing
tulips trumpet sun

time is passed and lost
last grain of the hourglass
has tumbled downward

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2001-07-03 10:13 PM

Wonderfully penned!

Take care,
Melissa~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2001-07-03 10:20 PM

look at this pop up again...goodness....

Irish, I love bluebells, too...anything that makes a lovely noise....

SEA...from me, to you....

Poeminister...imagery, complete....

Mysteria....smiles....

Auguste, thank you!....

Titia...me, too, you....

Interloper, your comments surpass this...what can I say...

Melybee....thank you so much for upping this a whole month....you are TOO kind....

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2001-07-04 11:00 AM

nice

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