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Come into my locked Heart
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Come into my locked Heart |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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This is about the silly coincidence of having had Love, losing it, wanting it again and then getting it but not being ready to accept it because your too damn scared of losing it again and in the process hurting someone who is probably trying to overcome the same problem. Where did this vicious circle start and when will we learn how to stop it? (laughing at my cluelessness  )Empty Lonely set me free Wanting Needing Let me be Pushing Shoving Cant come near Asking Searching Wiped a tear Loving Hating Show me how Hurting Crying Leave me now I had I lost I want again I try I fail You cant get in You come I push I hurt you too I asked You gave What did I do? Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. [This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 06-23-2001).] |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...oh that I were wise enough to answer your age-old question of how to stop 'this'...I recognize this so well, but just on the other side...not a pretty place to be... thanks for sharing... "...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..." |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
It seems like sometimes we want it so much for so long that we forget how to accept it and take care of it when it comes...great writing with an easy flow...I really liked the way you wrote this...just sorry you had to expierence it to write it~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hey there...isn't it any better yet?....I was hoping you were happy by now ((hugss)) *good poem ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I commend your insights. You have said much here with very little -- very admirable. I relate to your signature too. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I think having this knowledge is the first step in ending the cycle. Very nicely done. Sandra |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very very Good Thanks Connie |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
absolutely wonderfully written! and what you said in your intro is very true... it happens all the time... why??? well, that's one of the mysteries of Life.... ...i often call it "God's Little Joke"... lol  but that's when i'm being a realist which i try to make sure is not too often.... i'd rather believe in the fantasy that True Love can happen and can last forever, without this cyclical nonsense, but instead with both parties elated and wanting the other passionately and incessantly... teehee... what a dreamer i am, huh? lust forever!! that's the goal.... rofl!  again, great write!  |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Thank you all so much for your kind replies and words of encouragement Maureen, I am better... this is just a "still true" topic of mine, not really a pressing issue for me right now, just something to right about Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Hey you!!! Where the heck have you been? Missed ya lots sweetie. We'll catch up soon. Wow, though poem here. I can so relate to this. It never gets any easier, does it? All writing comes |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
No sweetie, never really does I'll find you soon {{{{{{{HUGZ}}}}}}}}Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent cadence and flow Thunderkyss! Oh how I do love to ponder, and you've done this beautifully. I really enjoyed your sentiments and the rhythmic nature of this piece! Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a great poem! However, that introduction sent me in a circle. I'm glad you wrote it! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ENJOYED!! Very nicely done... |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Thank you all so much for taking a moment to read Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Still looking for you! I know we'll catch up sooner or later. LOL. All writing comes |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
I can very well relate to your need for "topics"... I do the same a lot myself; writting about things that happened a while back. It tends to make people think you are down all the time when you're not... I am babbling now, I know... LoL. Thanks for such a beautiful poem. You wrote it very well... *hugs* What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I liked this very much...I say end the cycle by just accepting the love given as just that.....love given |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Lone Wolf... Yes, one of these days we will get lucky LOL Jessica... That is true, sometimes you have to specify somewhere that you are not hurting now, just writing about the past Thank you.SEA... Thank you dear, wish it were easier done than said instead of the other way around Trying though, every day all we can do is try. Thanks again Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
It would seem that you opened yourself up completely, which anyone in love would do. Many heartfelt feelings here. I loved it. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Thunderkyss, this was sad yet very beautiful. true sentiments and interesting question you raise here. i don't have the answer either...not sure if anyone does, but i agree with SEA...accept the love that is given...or like you say at least TRY Take care, great write!!Amy "but i see your true colors, |
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