Open Poetry #14 |
The Power Of Regret |
Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
To hold the last kiss from those favored lips to brush away that moment in temperd failure to hear the last goodbye that follows you for miles to remember those tears that fell as you drive to your own languished world. To hold the last kiss from those favored lips as you scream from your soul that you really do not wish to go to feel the last touch from the angels hands on your face as the tears drop from your eyes mixing with the dirt of your world. Lost in a time of regrets that push you away from her lost in your memories that keep you company as the windows fall apart showing how foolish you are can you still breathe your soul and follow the road back home. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very powerful write full of emotion |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Regret has much power as you have so vividly shown here. Remember though, it is only as powerful as we allow it to be. All writing comes |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Very moving and filled with so much feeling... Awesome. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...lost...lost...any feeling more hopeless? I think not... "...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
To hold the last kiss from those favored lips as you scream from your soul that you really do not wish to go to feel the last touch from the angels hands on your face as the tears drop from your eyes mixing with the dirt of your world. Lost in a time of regrets that push you away from her lost in your memories that keep you company as the windows fall apart showing how foolish you are can you still breathe your soul and follow the road back home. ========================== not foolish ... not when you love someone unselfishly... beautiful write of your soul breathing Michael. take care jm I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
nuclear impact, this.... |
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The meek Junior Member
since 2001-06-22
Posts 16Australia |
Very powerful words and great imagery. Excellent. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Love is never foolish.......especially when one loves unselfishly......I think if one follows the road of hearts in the end you will end up right where you belong......warmed in a blanket of love......Memories are like a blanket for me.....Beautiful write.... As Always Jenn E |
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