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Sunset And Stars |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Sunset And Stars I had a dream that there I stood As I hoped I always would With desert sand benieth my feet Relishing in it's suns heat I spread my arms and closed my eyes Inhaled the smells, You know why? For the sunset is on it's way To put and end to this perfect day But the night sky in all it's glory Will add a chapter to this story For the stars and galaxies In the desert are easier to see My man and I snuggle there With the cooling of night air And search the sky with all our hope Gazing through his telescope By Connie June 21, 2001 [This message has been edited by Zinsser (edited 06-22-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Must be beautiful outthere, love your poem. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
A perfect Utopia you have created, and an exquisite write to keep the dreamers dreaming... Lovely. Elise |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You have captured the essence of the moment neautifully, Connie. Great write!  All writing comes |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Titia: Thank You ever so much Elise: You are Very kind Thanks Lone Wolf: I'm glad you enjoyed Thanks To All: My deepest Thanks I mean it from the heart Thank You |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Familiar imagery which makes me wonder, Connie, what do you hope to find through that telescope? -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sounds like a wonderful evening out there Sandra |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Mark, One answer would be The Enitity of Infinity.... What would you be gazing for? Connie |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Sandra, Thanks... It gives me great pleasure to evoke imagery and emotion Something I never even thought I could do Thanks Connie |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Connie, I'd probably be gazing for a semblance of hope to keep my ideal regarding the good in humanity alive... -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very nice write, Zinsser...I really enjoyed this... sp  I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A lovely write! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
gr8 ... and I'll bet you "enjoyed the view." |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Mark: Look in the mirror...see it's right there. Don't look at the reflection...Look past to the Enitity of Infinity.Thats where the hope is ALIVE. When you see it there, then you can start to see it other places too. Snowpants: Thanks... it was fun to write Simple & yet... If you knew me...complex Sunshine: Thank You really.... Interloper Thank You... I love the "gr8" My old screan name on aol was gr8ful1 LOL Thank You |
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