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An Apple A Day
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An Apple A Day |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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An Apple A Day Each day I take a fantasy pill A placebo if you will. For it stirs the wind and drives my ship Gives me a resolute grip. It out sails the mundane of my day The ravages of our way The rages that make my eyes to tear Blood to curdle flesh to sear. It soothes the storms the black of the blight Lights a candle in the night. And makes a garden of the forest Turns me a geneticist. Gives to me the wonder of control Lightens the payment of toll. Shows me the treasure of the rainbow And the true white of the snow All of this on a butterflies flight Without the payment of wrong or right |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
All of this on a butterflies flight Without the payment of wrong or right Do so enjoy your work... filled with images and word play...a great read! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Capt Hair, Thank you for the quick response and nice comment. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Could you share a little of this with the rest of the world Sy. I think we all need a bit of YOUR perspective. Love this one!  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Spoken as a "Walter Mitty" twin. Enjoyed the read, moments of fantasy can be invigorating. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You are the apple of my eye Your poetry makes this butterfly sigh You're my spicy slice of winkie pie To your garden of Eden I wish to fly As long as you dream ... as long as you believe You'll be my "apple a day" ... and I'll be your Eve *winkiewinkie*     ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~  I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DeVine One, Of course, have a brail full. *L* VAS, Glad you enjoyed. JM, My sweet sweet Tinker Bell Love Ya. Sy |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
to read the why of your plea and ply to sing the gift, receive the lift to come and warm some cold within is why I read you, again, and then |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
wonderful poetry... regards, Sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, Thank you Lady. *L* Sudhir, Thank you my friend. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
An apple a day Might keep the doctor away But not a day goes by I don't long to read Sy! *S* This is great, Seymour... I enjoyed it much! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, There is nothing better then bringing you joy *L* |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey Sy! Gee..and I thought it was all about doctors and whatnot... Loved it...  K |
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